Haibun Postcard: from the railroad tracks near Reaney Park, Pullman

Nov 21, 2020
1 min read
Updated: Jun 18, 2024

The sun sets on wrinkled rose hips. They bob beside the tracks approaching Grand Avenue while underneath a leafless tree floats a ghost of gnats, looping and circling like chips of quartz. Gossamer spiderwebs drift above the rails and catch the twilight like fire. Pine needles slowly reclaim this path, burying wood and steel. The Palouse River sweeps fallen leaves along as it whispers southwest from its origin in the Hoodoo Mountains to the Snake River.
white spider weaves a web
above clear water
as night overflows its banks
November 20, 2020
Aidan Barger is an EcoArts Intern and a Creative Writing Major. See his full profile here.



I really enjoyed the quiet atmosphere and vivid imagery in this haibun. Sometimes I like revisiting reflective pieces like this with a realistic AI voices tool, which adds a different rhythm to the experience.
Does Davao tide schedule include sunrise / sunset alongside the tide curve?